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de tale of absinth minded mind
Autor: Boobis Typewriter (Občasný) - publikováno 4.7.2008 (08:49:34)

a green monkey

(a monk, a key - sure)

on my mind.

mind you -

- on my mind.

one rhyme

a time

hiding in the high grass

(brass, hi highway, high sees)

on its back

on the bank

(the river bank - still on track)

monkey

looking up

up the stream

(to the right, on the left)

alright, into the starless sky

the red sky

my startled mind

(I'm still shy)

the skylark...

it's getting dark

(and cold)

a spark

the red sky

on its mind

(mind you - on its mind)

my green monkey

hiding in the grass

I'm not minding you

you know

I'm hiding too.

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ref (Občasný) - 12.7.2008 > Pretty tutorial for beginning comsumers of poetry Tricky and full of joy -except the hiding (but who don t hide here... all the nicks...? ) Happy to see such things on the web...		Body: 5

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	Boobis Typewriter (Občasný) - 13.7.2008 > ref> Thank you ref. Sometimes I write things and just put them here for people to express what thez think about it. Some texts are quite experimental, like this one and I do not think (personally) that it is outstanding, but I think it is more than testing forms. I think it has some intrinsic value, at least for me. Poetry is quite difficult in general anyway. If yoy expersimental. I would recommend to you the text "The Lice of Jibberland." Personally, I conside this text one of the best published here, certainly in English. Anyway, Having fun with Pravomil Krivohlavy lately :) Thanks :))

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	ref (Občasný) - 13.7.2008 > Boobis Typewriter> Still a bit confused by ranking and recommending on this site... Not outstanding... mmm -well, I like this piece, because it made me laughing and sad at the same time ("hiding too"...). But now my mind is full of jibbering and it is hard for me to concentrate on right spelling Should use some sort of jibbtionary... (Thanks for that tip, some words nearly drove me mad)

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